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ARGGGG!!!!!!!!!!  Sorry everyone for not being on lately!  Soooo busy!!!!  I hates it, but it's all going to be over soon!  Woot summer vacation is soon to be!!  And then I'll have a lot more time to be on here, but until that I probably won't be on here that much, so if you message me and I don't reply for a while that's probably because I'm busy!  But I'll try to answer you!!
 

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So here's the deal right now I am writing my own Manga called Rich~Sword!  So most of my pictures will be of my characters!^^  If you have any questions about it just ask me, I love it when people get into my manga!^^
 
 
I also make flashes, but sadly Funart will not let me put them up here, but I do have a DA account so if you want to see them here is a link to my DA account-  shadowguarderforever.deviantart.com/ style="text-align: center;">


 
And every one who is reading this I want you all to meet the sweetest person ever!!  Here is a link to her profile
www.funart-central.net/profile-Nyuka.php!! ; She is soo awesome and you all should totally take a look at her story!  It's called the Dragonship and it's really awesome!!  I'm a BIG fan of it!    She's an awesome artist too!!  She was soo nice to go and recommend me on her profile so I though why not, her story is so cool , I'm gonna recommend her on mine too!
 
 
 
   
 
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173 Comments
 
 
Posted September 9th, 2008 04:15 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
whaaaa
~_________________~ I haven't talked to you in such a long while I'm so sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy~ToT

I'm currently in my graduation year of high school, so I'll probably be a bit busier then normally <3 Even so I'm also more motivated then ever so I'll try to upload more pages of my manga *nudges* which a certain person which name I shall not say should do as well... *intense stare*

How 'r you doing?? ^__^

Xx
Nyu~chan
Posted July 6th, 2008 01:28 PM by: celestialescapist
celestialescapist
No problem, your artwork is amazing ^-^
Posted July 6th, 2008 03:23 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^___________________^
Posted May 24th, 2008 08:09 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
COME BAAAACCCKKK T__T
MY FUNART-PARTNER XD XD XD!!!

Xx
Posted May 24th, 2008 05:16 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
I Back!!! XD I sorry I gone so long!!! I didn't mean to be, but it just happened!  I think I'll be on much more now!
Posted May 5th, 2008 05:08 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
buhaha xD
Looks like the bday art became a no-go after all xD But I still want to draw something with probably the both of us <3
But I still dont know what you kinda look like xD So its ok if you just give a description of your looks ^^ Ill give it a go xD <3

Xx
oh. . do you have a self-portrait maybe?? Manga is fine <3 Thats the way I draw anyways.. . But I can use that as well, so ^^

Nyu~chan/sama.
Posted May 13th, 2008 05:42 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
I'm sooooo sorry I haven't replied sooner!  Lots of things came up!  Sorry!!
Anyway Here's a description on how I looks!  Since fun art won't let me put a picture of my self on here:  I have long,-about to high middle of my back- brown hair.  I also have dark, brown eyes.  My hair is layered and I'm like 5'5"!  I normally keep my hair down and that's about it!
Posted May 24th, 2008 08:10 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
whah you're back . . :WHUG:

anyways <3
Do you have. . a pony or like. . just two strands hanging next to your face?? xD xD??
Posted May 24th, 2008 05:14 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Yeah I Sorry I gone so long!! *huggles*!!
 
I normally wear my hair down and I have layers and side swiped bangs.  My part is on the side of my hair.
Posted May 1st, 2008 01:10 PM by: rockleesbroccoli
rockleesbroccoli
No problem what so ever!
You really are a talented artist.
You deserve it ^^
Posted May 13th, 2008 05:45 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
By the way!  Totally lub your avatar tis sooo cute!
Posted May 13th, 2008 05:43 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Aww thank so soooo much!!!!
Posted April 9th, 2008 07:16 PM by: sora2
sora2
Hey thanx for the comment.
Posted April 11th, 2008 08:21 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Welcome welcomes!! ^____~
Posted March 31st, 2008 04:13 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
KYAAAAAAAAA

:munches on your head:

O__O'l I haven't spoken to you for a while <3 My birthday is coming up!!! THIS SUNDAY! O__O ME ISH GONNA BE 17 ZOMG NOEES I'LL BE OLD!!

Anyways x3 Since I forgot your birthday art. . (im so sorry I sincerely apologize and you may burn me with a 1000 suns and throw me into a lake of needles -please don't-) I'm gonne draw a birthday pic with the both of us together <3 But I do kinda need to know what you look like <3

Xx
Nyu~~chan
how's life? x3
Posted April 1st, 2008 02:09 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Oh noies it won't let me post one on the comments board so I'll just upload on onto my profile for a moment! Kay?
Posted April 1st, 2008 02:07 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
NYAAAAAAAAA!!! XDXD
Well happy birthday then!!!!!! Wow!!! XD
Lol it's okies!!  Wow sweets I would love that!!^^ I need to do something for you too! Hmmmm, me's sorry too; I've been soooo busy so I didn't find time to finish any of your pictures TT_TT!  But I'll be less busy soon -I hopes!-!!
 
Okies!  Well how bout a picture then?  Here I'll see if it lets me show you one!
Posted April 5th, 2008 12:28 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
noes can't see picture Ô__Ô!!!!
Posted May 13th, 2008 05:44 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
sorry it won't let me so I'll write you a description, kay?
Posted March 8th, 2008 06:23 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thanks i used cute refs^^
Posted March 8th, 2008 06:22 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thanks
Posted February 25th, 2008 04:13 PM by: brownsugar
brownsugar
hello <3 ur art
Posted February 25th, 2008 05:52 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^________^ Thank you sooooo much!!!! XD *Huggles*
 
You should go check out Nyuka's profile too, she's really good too!!
Posted February 13th, 2008 01:26 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
NOOOOOO
I DIDNT KNOW IT WAS YOUR BIRTHDAY! WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME!! O__________O

IM GONNA DRAW YOU A HAPPY (LATE) BIRTHDAY PIC SOON!

. . .
when I have time ?

T___T
WEEH SORRY!!
Posted February 13th, 2008 06:08 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Lol it's okay! Awww your so nice! Thanks lol wow I'm gonna have lots of pictures from you; yay! Yeah I understand that, I'm am soooo busy lately too with school and all. I have this huge to do list just laying next to me. That needs to get done tonight. The only reason I'm on here right now is because I'm looking up junk for my History project and my e-mails were full so I'm just checking them right now. Thanks again!!!!! XD
Posted February 10th, 2008 05:44 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thanks and you're welcome^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 09:08 AM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
Posted February 10th, 2008 10:47 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^^ Thank you soooooooo much I love it! XD
Posted February 10th, 2008 05:45 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
np^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 08:20 AM by: howlingwolf
howlingwolf
Thanks for the comments. ^v^
Posted February 10th, 2008 08:46 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Your welcome!^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 07:11 AM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
cool do you want me to make you something belated^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 07:14 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Huh?  Oh no that's okay, I mean you can if you want too.  I wasn't hinting or anything, haha.  You don't have to if you don't want to.  Thanks for offering though!  That was very nice of you!^^ <3
Posted February 10th, 2008 08:16 AM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
i did^^ it's yours smoke and fire demon oc as a chibi

if i can post it with your permission it's cute^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 08:47 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Okay sure!^^ Thank you so much! XD
Posted February 10th, 2008 08:57 AM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
okay^^ sorry replies are not going to my emails on others pros

on funart i'll post it here today and fac on Monday
Posted February 10th, 2008 07:10 AM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thanks^^
Posted February 10th, 2008 07:14 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Np! XD
Posted February 10th, 2008 11:27 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
yup^^
Posted February 8th, 2008 11:21 AM by: TKGBIdeon
TKGBIdeon
I must compliment on your anime drawings. They are fantastic.
Posted February 8th, 2008 07:24 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^^Thanks! XD
Posted January 27th, 2008 10:51 AM by: PropertyOfSly
PropertyOfSly
Why thank you very much! I'm very good, you??
Posted January 27th, 2008 12:42 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Your welcome!^^ I'm good too! XD
Posted January 9th, 2008 06:16 PM by: QTPie
QTPie
Hey!^^ Your arts real cute^^ Do ya wanna be friends?
Posted January 13th, 2008 07:11 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Oh sure I would love too!  Not much people on here any more so it's cool to make a new friend!^^  Oh and thankies *Gives you cookies*
Posted January 9th, 2008 11:13 AM by: Triss
Triss
Thanks for commenting on 'The Letter' :) you were right about some of the text, so you get some of a cookie!
The full thing says 'Lah de dah, Scooby doo, If you can read this then you don't need glasses' ;)
Posted January 9th, 2008 08:00 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
WOOT some part of a COOKIE!!! lol!  Your welcome!
Posted January 8th, 2008 03:48 PM by: PropertyOfSly
PropertyOfSly
Heh, hey how's it goin'? Thanx for the wonderful comments! :)
Posted January 8th, 2008 07:30 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Hi I'm good how are you?  Your welcome your pictures are really cute!
Posted January 8th, 2008 01:37 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
Heya!!
Shall we do an art trade?
<3
Posted January 8th, 2008 02:07 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
HI!^^ OMG Why didn't I think of that we really should!! >;)
Posted January 7th, 2008 05:19 PM by: chibiraine
chibiraine
*glomps* Thanks for the comment!! <3
Posted January 7th, 2008 08:12 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Your welcome!^^
Posted January 7th, 2008 04:54 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thnaks^^
Posted January 7th, 2008 08:11 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
welcome!!
Posted January 7th, 2008 02:17 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
Wiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for all the comments ^^
I'm glad you're sticking around with meh xD~!!!
Most of my friends are looking at my website specially designed for my manga (it's not all that pretty tho <__<) and that's why I don't get that much comments on it here on funart xD
So I'm really grateful to you!! That's why..
GIMME SOME DRUMS!!

tatatatatatatatatatatatatatata..............

I'm gonna draw you gift art!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Not sure if you want it xD
But I'm gonna make it anyways xD

so..

THANKIES!!!!

p.s. and upload some more piccies xD I love Rose xD
Posted January 7th, 2008 04:50 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
OMG I CAN'T WAIT THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^  Np I loves your art and your manga!!
Posted November 12th, 2007 12:59 PM by: Amelina
Amelina
thanks for the comments!!!
Posted November 12th, 2007 06:25 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
NP your pictures are totally cute!
Posted November 12th, 2007 06:29 PM by: Amelina
Amelina
aww thanks!!!!!!!
Posted October 6th, 2007 09:27 AM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
WOW XD
I read the description and I'd love to see a drawing of Rose! XD WHIPS ARE AWESOME!!!

Anyways.. I uploaded a new picture.. or.. tried to. It wouldn't upload, so I displayed it in my profile. ^o^ It's a few toadstools ;).. But it looks good enough for me. It took me 3 hours to make nya~ =_='l..

I hope you'll check it out ;).
Posted October 6th, 2007 09:36 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
i think i uploaded a pic of her a little while ago it might be up now not sure well anyway wow you read the whole thing!?!? thankies sorry if it was long! cool ill go check it out!^^
Posted October 5th, 2007 03:13 PM by: Triss
Triss
Cheers for commenting on Shadow :)
Posted October 5th, 2007 07:17 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^__^ np you did an awesome job on him!
Posted October 5th, 2007 02:07 PM by: Nyuka
Nyuka
I love your gallery. The characters are really cute and I read the story behind your pink-haired girl and I was very impressed :) Looks like you really thought a lot about her XD You've inspired me to make some decent profile-images for my own chara's..

=x=

I love them but I don't give them enough attention I think XD.
I hope you will start drawing out your manga before starting an anime ;) I think it won't be broadcasted in The Netherlands(my place XD) so.. and it'd be a shame. I must admit I haven't read the story in your profile because it looks kinda messy to read and it was so very long XD.. Make a short summary above it?

Well.. again, I think you have a great gallery and I'll keep an eye on your work ;).

Greetings and Kisses
Nyu~chan/sama
Posted October 5th, 2007 08:16 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
thankies nyu-chan your very sweet! *Huggles* woohoo that is so cool i inspired you lol jk yeah i thought i should do the profile pics just to give people a good look at them!  Yeah, i have A LOT of thought into my story, good idea DON"T read the thingy on my profile its old and i'm to lazy to delete it even though its not that hard to do, the new version is much better^^ Wow that is so cool that you live in the Netherlands but hey who knows maybe (like i said before) maybe well have the same company for sponsors or what not!
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To make a long story SHORT my manga is about a girl named Shamia Mochin, she lives in the 1st nation of Lawgon her family is really rich, these two people Indigo and zeke heard about her family all the way in the 2nd Nation of Herococo and thought it sounded interesting, (their thieves BTW) they go to the nation of Lawgon and dododo (skipping details) they go and try to steal from her family, but they get stopped and captured by Rose the Bounty hunter who is working for Shamia's father (Makes more sense with detail but im trying to make it short, lol not working) but rose maybe a very good bounty hunter but once she got her people she has a hard time keeping them locked up especially zeke and indigo who she has been try to capture for a while now.  So they get away and they decide to go back to Herococo because they don't feel like geting captured by rose again because she maybe easy to get away from but it hurts bad to get captured by her with her big bow whip (ok now im getting into to much detail)  But later on that week another person comes to Lawgon his name is Yuramae Ryuit and he wants revenge on Shamia's family so he steals shamia during the night and thats her to Herococo, then once they get to herococo they take a train to Leutsi, a town there, but a guy named Pheoc helps her excape but as soon as she gets off the train he dissapears like he was never there ooooooo lol.  She starts to wander though the the desrted area, when she bumps into two huge men (Litterly) she trys to take to them but they speck a totaly other laguage so she thinks its uselesss so she trys to get away but they stop her and pich her up and take her away and she is like tottaly WTF.  they take her to this place and tie her up, but then this girl who seems to be there leader comes (shamia's family is very hated in Herococ, details detalis, sorry its long and this is only the beginning of the sorry like the first few ep) so she has to keep quite anout who is is (the leder's name is Meanna and she speeks the same lauage) Meanna finds out how is is and orders the two men to go and kill her, as their taking her away to be killed Pheoc appears and trips themto save her, but leaves her to defed for her self.  She trys to get away but its almost usless, but she gets savedby three small boys who all they want to do is playshe trys to tell them that she needs to gt to seaport (so she can get a boot ride home) but they are still palying their game (like she is the madden and she is the princess and they are trying to still save her from the bug evil dragon.)  They take her to their viilage thought a secrate way into their room so she has no idea were she is.  Their older brother hears them in their room and comes in and sees her, he askes her who is is and how she got here because his village is small and he knows everyone there.  They sit down and take and she makes up this big lie becaues she is afread that he might want to kill her too.  He know she is lieing bacuase Shamia knows nothing about Herococ and the towns.  He makes her fell comfortable to tell him and when she does she doesn't care.  (BTW his name is Coshowto Sonica) (oh wow this is getting really reallly long im sorrry! ill make the last part short its getting to the end it will be vage but it will get to the point.)  She trys to get help from the village leader (Coshowtos's gandmother)  but they have their own problem and which is zeke and indigo they have stolen something very dangeious and important A shadowguard! but its in a magic box and they cant get it open, but shamia opens it and they have a big whoha about it fighting and yeah (trying to get to the end) and shamia winds up with it and Coshowto vallenters to take her home, but Zeke and Indigo fallow them trying to get eh Shadowguard!  Well that it there is a lot more to it like i said this is own the first few ep! Thankies for lissening i know it was long sorry!
Posted October 4th, 2007 09:41 AM by: Amelina
Amelina
OMG!!!! tHANKS!!!!!!!!FOR FAVING ME!!!!!!!!!!! I realt apreaciate it im going to put more pics if i canhugs* thanks!!!! XD
Posted October 4th, 2007 02:42 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
lol np! you faved me!  I like your art i can't wait to see more of it! XD
Posted October 3rd, 2007 05:43 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
thanks
Posted October 3rd, 2007 07:57 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
np
Posted October 3rd, 2007 08:23 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
kay^^
Posted October 3rd, 2007 05:07 PM by: Amelina
Amelina
Thanks
Posted October 3rd, 2007 05:33 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
np!^^
Posted October 3rd, 2007 04:57 PM by: Amelina
Amelina
what is your username of the other FAC?
Posted October 3rd, 2007 05:05 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Shadowguarderforever
Posted October 3rd, 2007 07:06 AM by: Amelina
Amelina
just put more here too because in my school the blocked Fac(the other) BUT I can seei it on deviant so... plz put more on the 2 pages. =3 >3
Posted October 3rd, 2007 03:43 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^__^ okay!!! X3
Posted September 21st, 2007 06:59 AM by: Amelina
Amelina
Hi ! Thanks for the coment you are a very good artist. *fav artist*
Posted September 21st, 2007 01:53 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^^ your welcome! Thankies soooo much!!!!!
Posted September 19th, 2007 05:01 PM by: luckylace222
luckylace222
xD OMG! YOU'RE HERE TOO!
Posted September 21st, 2007 01:53 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
YEP!^^ XD
Posted September 19th, 2007 04:42 PM by: HyperKitty
HyperKitty
Thank you for commenting on my kitty picture! I really appreciate it! XD
Posted October 3rd, 2007 03:51 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
your welcome its cute
Posted September 18th, 2007 08:31 PM by: Falconwolf
Falconwolf
Hello ShadowGaurderForever^^ it's me Falconlobo^^

did not know you were on here till i saw your new pic^^
Posted September 18th, 2007 04:55 PM by: beach_cat
beach_cat
howdy, trying to know everyone, swing around my site sometime
Posted August 21st, 2007 06:56 AM by: SnowyMoonWolf
SnowyMoonWolf
Your story is relly long!!!!  it's soooo cool!!!
Posted August 21st, 2007 12:12 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
yeah ^^ thank you!^______^
Posted August 13th, 2007 06:05 AM by: SnowyMoonWolf
SnowyMoonWolf
hi!!!!  You're a really good artist!!
Posted August 13th, 2007 08:16 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
aw *Huggles* Thank you soo much!^^ Wow some one else on fun art weird! 0_o but a good weird
Posted December 8th, 2006 07:13 AM by: KelKel
KelKel
Thanks for the comment ^_^
Posted December 9th, 2006 08:39 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
your welcome!!!
Posted November 20th, 2006 04:17 PM by: tikalgirl52
tikalgirl52
thank you for the comment
isn't Pokemon Mystery Dungeon such a fun game? :D
Posted November 30th, 2006 03:22 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
ya really fun!
Posted November 10th, 2006 08:26 PM by: darkphantom
darkphantom
please just write on my profile i cnt really find that reply thingy lol
Posted November 30th, 2006 03:22 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
ok
Posted November 10th, 2006 08:11 PM by: darkphantom
darkphantom
thnx for the comment it is actually danny and ember and no i didnt draw it
Posted November 10th, 2006 08:16 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
cool it's cool!
Posted November 6th, 2006 05:52 PM by: NeverDyingLover
NeverDyingLover
Ja, Germany.=D Thanks, I do now I learned better.^^
Posted November 6th, 2006 05:54 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^W^
Posted November 6th, 2006 06:20 PM by: NeverDyingLover
NeverDyingLover
Will you be my Friends?
Posted November 10th, 2006 08:24 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Ya!!!
Posted November 6th, 2006 01:04 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
Thanks for the fave my friend.=D
Posted November 6th, 2006 05:55 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Ya thanks for being mine too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted November 5th, 2006 09:48 PM by: VanKid
VanKid
thanks for the welcome...^.^
Posted November 6th, 2006 09:32 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
your welcome!!!!!
Posted November 5th, 2006 07:35 PM by: xXMissMurderXx
xXMissMurderXx
hmm it's a good start really it is but you might want to put more detail in like for example How her Brother was killed or Maybe put in a scence where she struggles to get away from the kidnapper? just a few suggestions :)
Posted November 5th, 2006 07:42 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
ya thanks her brother gets kill by the man who kidnaps her he trys to protcts her and thats how! And this is a very very very short verison of my story so ya it doesn't have much detail in it!!! And thanks for reading it!!!!!!
Posted November 5th, 2006 07:51 PM by: xXMissMurderXx
xXMissMurderXx
no problem! Can't wait till you post up the longer version! :D
Posted November 7th, 2006 05:08 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
It will take a while because I'm only alrealdy on the 5th chapter and i'm not even hafe way though ^_^; and when fished i got an offer by some one to put it in the Libary!!
Posted November 6th, 2006 09:32 AM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
OK i will after i finsh inproving it!!!!
Posted November 4th, 2006 09:47 PM by: number_371
number_371
Thanks for your comments, especially on Sally :)
Posted November 4th, 2006 10:01 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
ya it really looked cool!
Posted November 4th, 2006 07:07 PM by: loveCOFFEE
loveCOFFEE
Thanks!
Posted November 4th, 2006 07:46 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
ya thank you too!
Posted November 4th, 2006 03:12 PM by: Dragonxtail
Dragonxtail
OW~! Nice gallery ;X Keep it up girl~! X)
Posted November 4th, 2006 06:14 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
hty thanks! ! !
Posted November 4th, 2006 01:36 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
No prob.^_^
I'm glad you think it sounds cool.^^
Posted November 4th, 2006 02:29 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
Ya thanks did you like my story??
Posted November 4th, 2006 03:30 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
Hmm to tell you the truth I think it is pretty good, but not my fave.^^;
Posted November 4th, 2006 06:24 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
huh really why not? Theres alot more to it!
Posted November 4th, 2006 06:25 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
It's is only the 1st episode
Posted November 4th, 2006 07:41 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
Well, it's not really all my thing.^^;
I kinda like it, but I would not sit down and watch it, and wait for it.
Posted November 4th, 2006 07:48 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
oh ok sure it gets more interesting it's only the 1st seson but ya....
Posted November 4th, 2006 09:39 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
Hmmmm well then I hope to read more.^_^
Posted November 4th, 2006 10:02 PM by: RichSwordMaster
RichSwordMaster
^W^
Posted November 4th, 2006 11:05 PM by: sisaTao
sisaTao
Hehe.^_^
Hmmm I'm putting a new pic up.=D

Hay why don't you have any faves?