Overall it looks cool, it's just that her eyes are a different size XD the one on the left should be a bit smaller then the right and that's reversed.. And her mouth's a but off..

But it looks cool! It'd look better if you'd resize the pic a bit :) That way you don't have to scroll so much and you can get a complete image at once :D!!

Love the feeling I get from this! A real nightcreature!